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Deep, Diligent, Committed
School Recommendation
Katherine DeLuca
Katherine
DeLuca is a talented student and a highly respected member of our
community. Her tireless, sincere drive for knowledge and its
application has made her an energetic scholar, and consistently takes
her beyond the requirements of school. Her desire for knowledge is
matched by an equally strong determination to use her gifts in service
to others.
Katherine's passionate approach to
studies originates from a comfortable confidence in herself. She
thinks deeply, then moves into action. She grapples with how to
make an assignment or project her own, and from there her purposeful
energy is boundless. This depth and energy was apparent at the
end of ninth grade. She created an independent research project
about phosphates in the local water, tested many sites, analyzed her
results, taught herself PowerPoint, and presented her findings to a
group of peers and staff members. This project was the
culminating point of a year's striving in our math/science curriculum.
She advanced to "junior" level classes a full year ahead of
schedule. Because she exhausted our course offerings, this semester
Katherine is enrolled in a Calculus course through at a local
university, involving a lengthy commute from the suburbs.
Katherine
has taken on numerous leadership roles within our school community, as
you will see from her resume and application. Katherine has the natural
ability and drive to master many different areas of study, and she has
in fact excelled in all areas of our curriculum. She makes the
connections and sees the interrelationships. We find ourselves moved by
another quality that shines through constantly, and that is her
commitment to others. What strikes me is the heart
that she invests in all activities and her broad perspective.
She views activities as a means to an end, concerned with the influence
the team's efforts and success will have on the participants and on our
school's recognition within the larger community.
Teachers
see her committed to learning, committed to doing her best. She
thinks hard about the way things work and does not stop until she has
mastered the problems at hand, striving to grow and persevere with all
assignments. She is also a good listener, which no doubt contributes
both to her quick grasp of material and to the pleasure of others feel
when working with her. In addition, she is a loyal and
trustworthy friend.
As a young woman who has taken
the lead in many aspects of school life - academics, athletics,
government, and service - Katherine has repeatedly demonstrated the
depth of her maturity, her moral commitments, her trustworthiness, and
her reliability. She is a leader more by example and commitment
than by an actual desire to lead. She is gentle, soft-spoken,
and good-humored and has a strong sense of integrity.
We
enthusiastically recommend Katherine for admission to your program
where we expect her to flourish in a community of talented and
thoughtful students like herself. Please feel free to contact me
for any further information about this remarkable young woman.
Sincerely,
Bright But Weak Effort
School Recommendation
Ellen Fareid
Ellen is an extremely intelligent young woman. She is mature,
poised and insightful. We have seen much growth since the end of
last year in the areas of work production and engagement in her
studies. This had been a major issue for her, but since the spring she
has been meeting her challenges head-on.
A young woman of many interests, Ellen is an avid reader and
writer. She puts much time and effort into her writing, and
attended the Woodlock College summer program for creative writing last
July. She also participates in on-line edits and exchanges of
work with others interested in fiction. Aside from writing, Ellen has
been involved with various choirs and chorals since 5th grade, and
often sings in church, community choirs and a cappella with
friends. She also exhibits strengths in math, is a tutor to
younger students. An independent-minded student, Ellen’s
inquisitive nature leads her to do research outside of school if she
wants to learn about something. Her eyes and ears are open!
Teachers see Ellen as a student they can count on to ask really
interesting questions. Her calm demeanor and her reflective, thoughtful
nature are rare. She has real depth and keen observation skills..
Although quiet in a group setting, she is observant and attentive.
These qualities lay the foundation for her to continue to hone her
skills as a powerful creative writer. She is young woman of deep
conviction, eagerly helps others with their work (in the past, often at
her own expense!). She is kind and embracing to others and has a
sense of responsibility for the people in her life.
Ellen has learned from the issues she had with work-production last
year and is moving forward toward creating a future in that will allow
her to develop her interests. She gets tremendous joy from
writing, and is planning to work in publishing or editing in the
future. I see her as a student that is now emerging in a sure-footed
way into adulthood, and who will benefit from what your school has to
offer.
Please call me if you would like to discuss her candidacy in more detail.
Sincerely,
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